THE ME Inside of ME
I have a secret living deep inside of me,
A hidden place wherein me dwells
A secret few can see.
Way down deep inside me lives the ME I used to be,
Untouched by human weaknesses,
Before, when I was free.
Life itself took aim and fired at certain parts of me,
Wrapped chains of fear around my soul,
But freedom must be free.
With each breath my self I see much like I used to be,
With ever breath I’m younger still,
I want you all to see!
Such a sense of loss, and then such a sense of victory in the reclaiming! Great interpretation, great piece.
Thank you!!!!
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I enjoyed this.
I wonder how many of us strive to find “the me I used to be”?
One has to acknowledge it is there before it can be found! lol Thanks for coming by!
This is beautiful. I love the way the feelings are expressed so we totally understand.
My favorite lines are these:
“Way down deep inside me lives the ME I used to be,
Untouched by human weaknesses,
Before, when I was free.”
Just lovely! Thank you.
I appreciate your kind and thoughtful words! Thank you for stopping by!
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